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Old 07-16-2007, 01:33 AM   #1
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Heres some poems I wrote. I'll post more. These are dedicated to the same person!


Untitled.
I wanted to call you, I really did.
I just thought it might be weird.
I was living in my own fear.
I think it was too late.

I thought about us, what happened.
I thought about what you would say.
I even thought about that day.
I missed you, never though would I admit it.

I wondered what you were thinking about.
Was it me? Was it her?
I can still feel the pain that you caused me.
I even hated you for it.

I felt like I had a right to be mad.
Then i realized this whole thing was making you sad.
I knew you were sorry,
But that doesnt make it right.

Now I can forgive you.
I've moved on.
But you I never will forget.
Or regret.



It used to be us

It used to be us.
All alone.
It used to be us.
Just talking on the phone.

It used to be us.
They all would stare.
It used to be us.
Without a care.

It used to be us.
Sitting together in the park.
It used to be us.
Now all thats left is a mark.

It used to be us.
Wiping each others tears.
It used to be us
Forgeting about the fears.

It used to be us.
Together till the end.
It used to be us
Letters we would send.

It used to be Us...
Until she came along...


My first love

I loved him, alot.
I know he loved me too.
He told me, in our secret spot.
Now I miss him more then ever.

I know things didnt work out
Like we wanted them too.
Its not something that will make me pout.
Hes found someone different, and so have I.

He was my first true love,
Whom I shall never forget.
He'll always have a special place in my heart.
He knows how important he is.

Even though it didnt last.
I never would want to change the past.
My memories him were more then good.
I would even go back for more if I could.

I loved him, and a part of me still does.
I know he feels the same way.
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Old 07-16-2007, 01:40 AM   #2
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beautifully written!
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Old 07-16-2007, 01:41 AM   #3
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Those are good.
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thanks both of you. It means alot! i just added one.. that i just wrote lol.
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Untitled is my favorite
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Old 07-16-2007, 01:48 AM   #6
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That was the first one I wrote about this person! When my emotions were all over the place.
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I'd have to say the new one's my favorite.
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aww thanks! thats my favorite out of the three
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Someone's been burned. Eeeeeemo. Write some poems about the circus.
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Old 07-16-2007, 11:39 AM   #10
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Great poems, the first one was my favorite
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