Who's outline is best?

Ikin · 07-13-2007, 01:19 PM

Vote for your favorite book outline here!

Ikin's:
Chapter 1
* Some random terrorist attacks New York
* The reader is told that people with extraordinary abilities are being born, and they will have to join up and save the world and such.
Chapters 2-5 or 6
*Each chapter focuses on someone discovering their abilities.
* One of these people is Imua, who has a premonition of the prominent business man, Matthew Triggs, planning an attack
Chapters 6 or 7-8 or 9
* We are introduced to Triggs, and we learn about his life and diabolical scheme to gain political power.
* Some of our heroes meet up for the first time.
8 or 9-10
* Imua, in vain, tries to tell people of the attack, but of course no one listens.
* He meets another hero, and together, the two realize they have to stop it, so they head to New York.
10-13
* Triggs send agents to all our heroes, in the hopes that they will join him. Some accept, some decline
14-16
* Imua and...the other guy continue on their journey and meet more heroes.
16-19
Okay, here it gets kinda hazy... I'm sure someone can work something out.
* Triggs wins the election
20-22
* A big battle between the heroes and the villains ensues.
* Triggs is taken into custody, but escapes and goes into hiding.
* The presense of metas isn't revealed, but all our heroes basically split up and go on with their lives.

Ryu's
In a world where Metahumans are appearing all over the place, a group start to discover their abilities and are unconsciously drawn to each other, leading them to Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, USA.

A group known as the Syndicate are opposing these new Metahumans, with their leader, Matthew Triggs, gaining massive power both in the political world as well as the world of the Meta’s.

In order to protect themselves, the ones they love and their country, the new Metahumans will need to band together, but will they find each other in time?

Quick Wing's
The story starts in NY after the bomb or some other kind of problem. It focuses on a group of 4 or 5 friends, and one of them goes missing after the event mentioned above. They all have powers, but the one who is missing is the only one who knows it. The group finds out that their friend was taken by the Syndicate for having powers and they soon discover theirs. So they try and find their friend and learn more about why he/she was taken.